Thursday, March 9, 2017

My Tangelo

The Tangelo

The Tangelo looks like an bumpy, Orange stress ball.
The Tangelo feels like an scrunch up  pace of orange  paper wrapped up in gladwrap every well raped .
Smells like a yummy worm smell of summer.
The Tangelo sounds  like a crispy, crackly sound.
The tanglo tace not just like an orange but like a sweet juicy mouth watering tasty loley.
The skin of the Tangelo   is a sower sweet tace
As I bite into it and the juice squirts everywhere.
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My learning in my Tangelo story I have been trying to put adjectives in my writing and I tried to make it make sense and use the 5 senses in my writing as well.
I learnt to use adjectives in my writing and I think I did it well with that.

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