We are a class of year 6, 7 & 8 learners in learning space Te Ngahere at Paihia School in Northland, New Zealand. Our teachers are Whaea Becks and Whaea Chrissy.
Friday, March 10, 2017
The Tangelo
The tangelo looked like an orange, bumpy thing.
The tangelo feels bumpy an slime.
The tangelo smells like it's nosy an it smells good.
The tangelo sounds like an orange but like gooder.
The tangelo tasty like an orange but cool
This is my tangelo descriptive writing. I was learning how to make a good writing. For the tangelo I've done a good writing. But
I didn’t use my onomatopoeia and my similes
And I hope I do a good tangelo writing next time.
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