The Tangelo
The Tangelo looks like an bumpy, Orange stress ball.
The Tangelo feels like an scrunch up pace of orange paper wrapped up in gladwrap every well raped .
Smells like a yummy worm smell of summer.
The Tangelo sounds like a crispy, crackly sound.
The tanglo tace not just like an orange but like a sweet juicy mouth watering tasty loley.
The skin of the Tangelo is a sower sweet tace
As I bite into it and the juice squirts everywhere.
My learning in my Tangelo story I have been trying to put adjectives in my writing and I tried to make it make sense and use the 5 senses in my writing as well.
I learnt to use adjectives in my writing and I think I did it well with that.
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