We are a class of year 6, 7 & 8 learners in learning space Te Ngahere at Paihia School in Northland, New Zealand. Our teachers are Whaea Becks and Whaea Chrissy.
Hi Tess I love the story, I love how they get stranded.It reminds me a bit of Pinocchio, when he gets swallowed up by the whale. Remember that every time you make someone say something, it is on a new line. Freya
Hi Tess
ReplyDeleteI love the story, I love how they get stranded.It reminds me a bit of Pinocchio, when he gets swallowed up by the whale. Remember that every time you make someone say something, it is on a new line.
Freya
Great story and I love your descriptive use of language. Remember Q is always followed by a U (quickly not qwickly!) Love your writing, hugs Mum X
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