Wednesday, June 22, 2016
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Wednesday, June 8, 2016
Darrius' Thinglink
Hi my name is Darrius, this is my
Thinglink post. I learnt about blog intros with Chris. Thank you I hope you like it.
Thursday, June 2, 2016
Short shorts no no
Short shorts no no
Reported by: Kartell
19-05-16
During the holidays Thomas Takimoana,his cousin, sister, step brother and niece went to the Kawakawa pool at the Bay Of Islands Recreation centre.
While they were swimming a gentleman in very short shorts came out of the changing rooms . Thomas and his family found this very amusing. They started laughed at him, he turned and stared at them. They got nervous and swam away.
Thomas said he learnt a very important lesson. This was, not to ever wear short shorts in a public place or to the pools .
I was learning to write a report about my buddy’s holliday. We had to do Who they were with What they did Where they went. Then Whaea Chrissy and I had to organise them into paragraphs. So it would make sense. I also had to think of a headline to hook the reader in.
I think i learnt a lot about reports I really like the title name Short Short No No the funny bit is when the Gentleman in very short shorts comes out
Wednesday, June 1, 2016
Brodi's Thinglink
I have learnt not to share personal information because people can hack you and come to your house.
Sharnee's Thinglink
What I have learnt is not to share your personal information to anyone. Also be Cybersmart
Emma's Thinglink
I have learnt not to share personal information about myself to the world.Also to be Cybersmart safe.
Kingi's Thinglink
I learnt about Thinglink and we had to write about some of our school and teacher and what we liked. I learnt to be safe by not putting in your whole name and details.
Ava's Thinglink
Hi I'm Ava my class has been doing stuff with Chris, for cyber safety. He taught us to not give away information to other people.
Yuktha's Thinglink
This is my thing link. I learned that you don’t share your personal information (like where you live for instance).
Cheyenne's Thinglink
Hi my name is Cheyenne this is my thing link. I learnt that you can not share your private Things.
Stacey Jones Boigraphy By: Aliyah
Stacey Jones
Some Quick facts about Stacey Jones
- Born: 1976
- Grew up: Auckland
- Schools: St paul’s college
- Family: Married to Rachelle; one Daughter, Chellcey
- Claim to fame: Outstanded rugby league player,both for the Auckland warriors and the kiwis
- Born and raised in Auckland, and happily settled there with his wife and Daughter.
- Stacey Jones was playing for the Junior kiwis and the Auckland
Stacey Jones played rugby league when he play he finds gaps that most of us can't even see, he’s very quick, very powerful and highly skilled. But boy is he modest.
Stacey Jones was in born in 1976. He grew up in Auckland. Stacey Jones has a family, his wife's name is Rachelle and only daughter is Chellcey. Stacey Jones loved playing rugby his favourite part of the game was tackling. When he had the ball he loved to run through gaps. He got 120,000 dollars every 12 hours he played in Greymouth and in Auckland.
This is some photos of Stacey jones.
- What you were doing or Walt Writing.
A Biography story about Stacey Jones
- What you think you did well.
I think I did it well I search up facts about Stacey jones
- What you think you could do better next time.
Read thought the book and find more information
- Make sure it is your best work.
I tried to read through the hole book but I took too long.
Jordon's Biography
Ann Makosinski
How would you like a flashlight that turns on by the heat off the body temperature.
What do you want to make next.
What are you future goals.
Your future goals are to make the world a better places.
British columbia's Ann Makosinski is a young inventor who was able to invent a flashlight that turns on by the heat of a human hand alone while she was still in high school. She was born in October 3, 1997 (age 16 years) She went to high school at Michael’s University school.
She used peltier tiles for the thermoelectric component one side is very cold and the other side is very hot that is how the flashlight works. But when one side is heated and the other feels cool ambient air, electricity is conducted and the flashlight was able to function perfectly without batteries.
Then after you made the flashlight you went and made a E drink that can charge your phone by holding a cup. Then you want to help the plant by making new things and some inventions that can help the environment.
REPORT CHECKLIST - SELF ASSESSMENT | |
My work has a title. | ✓ |
I have introduced my topic with a general statement. | ✓ |
I have a new paragraph for each different set of facts. | ✓ |
I have written these facts in my own words (not a copy and paste, this is called plagiarism) | ✓ |
I have used language that is precise and factual. | ✓ |
I have a conclusion ending. | ✓ |
I have checked my work for spelling mistakes. | ✓ |
I have used capital letters, full stops, commas and other punctuation where it is needed. | ✓ |
I am satisfied that my work makes sense. | ✓ |
I am proud of my writing. | ✓ |
My reflection | |
REPORT CHECKLIST - PEER ASSESSMENT | |
Your work has a title. | ✓ |
You have introduced my topic with a general statement. | ✓ |
You have a new paragraph for each different set of facts. | ✓ |
You have written these facts in my own words (not a copy and paste, this is called plagiarism) | ✓ |
You have used language that is precise and factual. | ✓ |
You have a conclusion ending. | |
You have checked my work for spelling mistakes. | ✓ |
You have used capital letters, full stops, commas and other punctuation where it is needed. | ✓ |
Your work makes sense. | ✓ |
Peer Comment | |
This writing has been self and peer assessed there may still be errors.
Alazhays Biography
Louis Braille
Have you ever wondered how blind learn the alphabet.
Who is Louis Braille
Louis Braille is a blind person who invented a way to learn alphabets using upraised dots in different series.
When was he born
He was born in Coupvray, France and born in 1809.
What he does for a job
At Nineteen years old he became a Full - time teacher at a Royal Institute for blind in Paris.
How he was blinded
He at the age of 3 had an eye injury which left him blind until the age of 43 he died.
REPORT CHECKLIST - SELF ASSESSMENT | |
My work has a title. | Yes |
I have introduced my topic with a general statement. | Yes |
I have a new paragraph for each different set of facts. | Yes |
I have written these facts in my own words (not a copy and paste, this is called plagiarism | Yes |
I have used language that is precise and factual. | Yes |
I have a conclusion ending. | |
I have checked my work for spelling mistakes. | Yes |
I have used capital letters, full stops, commas and other punctuation where it is needed. | Yes |
I am satisfied that my work makes sense. | Yes |
I am proud of my writing. | Yes |
My reflection | |
REPORT CHECKLIST - PEER ASSESSMENT | |
Your work has a title. | Yes |
You have introduced my topic with a general statement. | Yes |
You have a new paragraph for each different set of facts. | Yes |
You have written these facts in my own words (not a copy and paste, this is called plagiarism) | Yes |
You have used language that is precise and factual. | Yes |
You have a conclusion ending. | |
You have checked my work for spelling mistakes. | Yes |
You have used capital letters, full stops, commas and other punctuation where it is needed. | Yes |
Your work makes sense. | Yes |
Peer Comment | |
Biography By Thomas
By: Thomas Ann Makosinski- who changed the world. Ever wanted to change the world by inventing a flashlight that runs on the heat of the human hand alone? British columbia's Ann Makosinski was able to invent a flashlight that runs purely without batteries. She was Born in October 3rd 1997 in victoria, Canada. She is now 18 years old. She also goes to St. michaels university. Her interests are science and insects. She invented it in 2013 on December the 23rd and when she was 16 She invented the hollow flashlight. She was on the tonight show twice with Jimmy Fallon. She also invented the e-drink on the 14th of April 2015.. Ann Makosinski is a good and inspirational person to study about. Especially if you need to study Science and Insects. She has an amazing life. My reflection: WALT: I was learning to structure a biography What I did well: What I think I did well is that I was the last one to start my biography and I finished early. What I could Do better next time: I could just start on biography instead of starting video notes over and over again. Brad helped me fix up my mistakes that I had for my biography.. Thank you brad. REPORT CHECKLIST - SELF ASSESSMENT My work has a title. Yes I have introduced my topic with a general statement. Yes I have a new paragraph for each different set of facts. Yes I have written these facts in my own words (not a copy and paste, this is called plagiarism) Yes I have used language that is precise and factual. yes I have a conclusion ending. Yes I have checked my work for spelling mistakes. Yes I have used capital letters, full stops, commas and other punctuation where it is needed. yes I am satisfied that my work makes sense. Yes I am proud of my writing. Yes My reflection yes
Lily's Thinglink
I have been learning about the cybersmart footprint. To protect ourselves from people we don‘t know.
Arihia's Thinglink
I learnt that you can’t share personal information or they could track you down and hurt you.
Sam's Thinglink
I have learnt not to share personal information because people might try to find you.
Ngahuia - About Me
This is my Thinglink. I learned that you don’t share personal facts (like where you live.)
Tessa - About Me
The thing I learned a Cybersmart is that you can’t give away personal information because then people know and that could lead to problems.
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